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SalemFuchs

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« on: June 30, 2004, 06:59:38 AM »
(Note: I wrote it while listening to some EuroTech music. It's supposed to be directed to enemies.)

Mine...
27/Jun/2004 By: Salem Fuchs

My Duo-Spirit, it leaves me now.
Nothing is forsaken, and nothing is forgotten.
You are target, and you are foe.
The end is near... Embrace yourself!

All is known that none is safe!
Death is not vital, death is too easy.
Death is too fast, it will not please me.
You just wait, for I have much better plans for you.
You must stay, and you must suffer.
You must pay, and you must suffer!

All is lost, your soul is mine.
You're my target, you belong to me.
You are mine, you can't escape!
You can run, but you can't hide!
You're my enemy, and you will pay.

My Duo-Spirit, it has left me now.
I am free, I'm free at last!
Free of light, for you are mine!
Fear my wrath, all hell is loose!
Your fate is sealed... You belong to me.

My Duo-Spirit cannot help you now!
My Duo-Spirit cannot contain me now!

I am free, you will know...
I am king, and you're my enemy,
See my crown, see my throne.
Fear my wrath, you will bow.
I am free, and you are mine!
Fear my wrath... you must know... that it's your destiny.
It's your... destiny.
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« Reply #1 on: June 30, 2004, 07:06:10 AM »
It is going to take a little bit to take this in...

wait...

okay got it. Methinks it is okay, but like with most songs I WILL need to hear it in order to have any substantial opinion at all.

Blessed Be,
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« Reply #2 on: June 30, 2004, 07:11:17 AM »
Sweat I don't really know how to sing. But I think the song would fit into the rock category (maybe Metal?).

[EDIT 00000001] If I knew how to sing I would post a sample, but I suck at it. And I don't think you want to hear me sing, lol. Sweat
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« Reply #3 on: June 30, 2004, 12:01:04 PM »
lol, I can't sing too well either, but if you find a voice that fits a genre you like then go for it. I have a decent punk voice, so that is what I am going to try and do, if I don't learn to play drums.

Blessed Be,
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« Reply #4 on: June 30, 2004, 02:05:29 PM »
Quote from: Arrowhead
I have a decent punk voice, so that is what I am going to try and do, if I don't learn to play drums.

Cool go for it!
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« Reply #5 on: June 30, 2004, 09:53:07 PM »
Have you written sheet music/tabs for this song? If you have, I can perform it for you.
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« Reply #6 on: June 30, 2004, 10:23:36 PM »
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Have you written sheet music/tabs for this song? If you have, I can perform it for you.
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Oy, unfortunately I don't know how to read/write sheet music nor tabs. Sorry. Damnit! I need to start taking music classes... Sigh
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« Reply #7 on: June 30, 2004, 10:38:26 PM »
Wow, dude, that stuff's pretty basic. Pretty much any beginner's class either teaches you that or expects you to know already. Razz
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« Reply #8 on: July 03, 2004, 02:50:06 PM »
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If I knew how to sing I would post a sample, but I suck at it. And I don't think you want to hear me sing, lol

You should try! I think you'll do great! *pounces!* Smile
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« Reply #9 on: July 04, 2004, 12:03:41 AM »
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You should try! I think you'll do great! *pounces!* Smile

LOL! Seriously you don't want to hear me sing. It's like listening to all hell break loose in your ears. Sweat
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« Reply #10 on: July 04, 2004, 04:19:46 PM »
I just went to a musical thrown together in a week... in Kansas... I think my ears can survive ANYTHING, LOL! :lol:
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« Reply #11 on: July 04, 2004, 04:20:40 PM »
Sorry! That was me! I forgot that I wasn't logged in yet... Sweat
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